Hmm
I gotta like you just for your alias and a diatribe of yours I once saw on the BBS: but, this was pretty rubbish. The animation was limited at best, and there was no substance or humour to the movie. You can do a whole lot better than this, so I don't really know why you wasted your time making or submitting it.
I slapped this together real quick and its a parody/tribute to cletus the fetus if you happened to read the author comments OR credits. Watch their toons and you will understand.
Mixed feelings
I like the atmosphere & 'story', the music/FX go well with the movie, and the art style is unique. My only real problem with it is it doesn't really show that much in the way of Flash skills. As a movie, it stands out and deserves a better score than it's got.
yes it deserves a 6 atleast :P
Cool little video
I like the idea of it, and I love the peas clip. Maybe I should've named it Piano Piss, see what you made of that =)
Nice job, anyway, gonna go have a look at some other peoples' stuff on the APortal now for some inspiration (bout time I submitted something new)
Sequel please!
Hmm, well I wonder why you like the peas clip? ;) Glad you enjoyed it. After all, this project was all about supporting the audio portal artists. As for a sequel, hmmm, why not? I'll see what I can do. Have that as a little side project perhaps. And I'll see if I can sweeze another one of your songs in. ;)
P.S. You make a piano piss song, and I'll see what I can do :P
OK...
You obviously have animationitatitive (eh????) talent. Why waste it on drawing clocks? I think you could do a lot better. It's got a touch of wierdness, which is always great to see. Music needs compressing, though - movie is way too short for the filesize. Have a play with the audio options when you export the swf file (try 16 or 32 kbs).
Overall, a good enough effort. Would be good to see you move up & onwards from this, so I'll keep an eye open for your future submissions.
It's Animationative, and I guess I could do something other than clocks. BTW, Thrift's Hat 2 is out, the last of the...uhh..miniseries? I dunno. Anyway, check it out, I'll be working on my montage of crazy images...yeahhh.
OI
FFS put a >>CONTINUE>> button on your text intro. I fell asleep while I was waiting for the movie to start.
I'll keep that in mind, thank you.
Nice sig
But I'm surprised they allow 200kb sigs on the site you post at. All the members must have T1 connections or something.
Cool idea to fit a movie into a 468x60/70 space though.
I host it on my own site, so the other forums dont complain :P
I'm not a big fan of your stuff
But it's nothing if not interesting. You seem to be going for quantity rather than quality, I'd love to see you put some time into an epic game or movie, polished and shiny (?eh?), rather (or as well as) producing masses of short weird things.
Anyway, keep flashing, your stuff makes me (and presumably other people) chuckle, so it definitely merits its place on NG.
why would i waste my time on these fags
Quick and violent
Not the best ever, but pretty entertaining. Always nice to see GOOD stick movies as opposed to the usual tripe.
Cool preloader, too.
hmm.. i dont suppose this deserves to be called a GOOD srick movie as compared to xiao xiao or any of ringfinger's movies... but thanx anyways
about the preloader - its quite lame actually... just my logo and the percent loaded.... usually i do all those nifty shifty actionscript stuff but i was just way too tired when i finished this (it carried me on way after midnight and i had skool the next day)
Very nice
Pretty damn good for your first submission
Plus points: Decent filesize, good song. Competent art, nice mix of background & foreground images. Good grasp of what Flash can offer, and use of the same.
Minus points: No REPLAY button. L.Blue text is OK for dark backgrounds, but almost invisible on some of the light ones. Lacks a comprehensible storyline and could use some humour. Sub-titles run off-screen occasionally.
It's nice to see someone who actually WANTS to make good Flash, rather than users who are content to create crap that's just good enough to scrape through the Portal. Definitely keep learning, and submitting, next time I check, I want you to have a A+ batting average.... =). And ignore any negative feedback you may get from the untalented unwashed masses. Good luck with it!!!
PS heh, 3.5, here we come....
Wow, now that is VOTING POWER. ^_^
I'm glad you liked it, and I appreciate the support.
A replay button is basic AS and I was a bit foolish to forget putting one in. My first episode for Mega Force will be sure to have one. As well as letterboxing for clearly readable subtitles.
People are investing a lot of voting points on me, so I'll try my best to pay dividends with my future submissions!
Age 55, Male
Flashsmith
UK
Joined on 4/25/03
The Failures - Episode 2½ 
The Ending 
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Circus Randomus 
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