Score: 10

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submission: Star Syndicate Christmas

date: December 24, 2004

Fifened. After all, it is Christmas.

Score: 4

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submission: DailyToon12232004

date: December 23, 2004

Impressed by the menu, it actually looked semi-professional, so kudos to whoever did that. Needed a <back< button in each movie.

NLowrider: for god's sake, drop that intro shit. It's too long and boring. As for the movie, I couldn't understand more than about 1 in 5 words

scrap_head: not too bad, but could use an improvement in drawing style. Joke could've bee stretched out a little longer, too. Add more detail to storyline & graphics

Lavagasm: Sick, I blew the whistle for that before, and I just did it again. I'm NOT a foamy fan, but that's just not funny.

ThreeStar: I expected better, that was just boring and pointless. Yes, I know that's the idea. But some of your other stuff was a lot more entertaining.

Score: 10

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submission: ELEPHANT: episode 1

date: December 18, 2004

Always liked your stuff, since Wonderlick days. Your style & graphics have improved drastically, but the weird thread still runs through you Flash. Great stuff, it's good to see you're still active as a movie maker.

Score: 2

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submission: delete this please

date: December 18, 2004

Yeah, I can tell you didn't read any tutorials, because I just had to download a 3.5Mb file for a game that should have been less than 100 Kb. I also suspect that you ripped the source code from somewhere, too.

Maybe you SHOULD read some tutorials, that way, you might be able to make a decent, original game. You might also learn how to COMPRESS YOUR FUCKING AUDIO.

Score: 9

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submission: The end of us

date: December 18, 2004

Your school is doing a great job. It must help that you have some pretty cool artistic talents. That was very professional, nice graphics, not too much in the way of animation, but a pretty polished submission. Good choice of audio, too.

Score: 3

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submission: Tricky Ball

date: December 13, 2004

Extremely frustrating. Didn't obey any of the laws of physics that I learnt at school. Also, I should probably also add: don't upload movies to NG if they're not your own work. I can't find the FAQ page that said it, but it basically said, if a Flash isn't your own work, get the original author to submit it.

Oh yeah, here we go: from the FLASH SUBMIT page, which you viewed when you were submitting this swf:
Your movie must not be someone else's work! We will delete your account as punishment.
If you see something you like elsewhere, ask them to submit it, or notify us.

Score: 4

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submission: You Got Served

date: December 13, 2004

Not bad for a first SMV. Some quite groovy break-dancing by da bear. Not exactly sure how or why 'I got served'/// good enough music, but looping wasn't too smooth

Pretty good

Score: 2

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submission: The ScaryMovie Collection

date: December 13, 2004

lol @ the crapiness. beyond that, no comment...

Score: 3

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submission: Tennis OK?!?!

date: December 13, 2004

Graphic style was OK, and the storyline was dubious. Also, I couldn't understand what the non-asian guy was saying most of the time. Spend a bit more time on everything and it should turn out pretty good... hopefully...

Score: 5

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submission: ddddddddddd

date: December 13, 2004

Yeah, good variation on pong, and nice enough graphics. But you need to run a hitTest between your paddle and the opponents, or between your paddle and the left-hand end of the table, to prevent cheating (as mentioned in previous reviews). Also some sounds/music would be nice.
Sure the table is wider in real air-hockey, too